My Hometown
PARAGRAPH 1: INTRODUCTION( Be sure to include some background material, the main topic sentence for the whole essay, and a list of the subtopics in the order that you wil discuss them in the essay.
My hometown, Dajia, is located in the north west corner of Taichung County. Sitting on the coastline, it is a town famous for its Master Temple. Due to the annual pilgrimage to the temple, the small town is crowed with pilgrams and visitors every Lunar March. " Perhaps there are still other places and things that you would like to go to?' If you ask, I would defintely say yes, and right now I am going to introdue to you the Royal and Filial Monumental Archway, Tie Jen Mountain and the orignal famous butter crisp pastry in twon.
PARAGRAPH 2: DISCUSSION OF SUBTOPIC 1
Topic Sentence: One of the historical spots of DaJia Town is the Royal and Filial Monumental Archway.
Brief Outline of Content( You can use a list of important words.)
This mounmental archway is inscribed with Chun-Niang Li is the Buddua who is worshipped by the residents in Zhen Lan temple. This monumetal archway was build in Pao-Guang year 28 on the order of the emperor to praise Ma-Zu's great behavior. In this place, you can come and read the story and also find a tranguil moment after you're tired.
PARAGRAPH 3: DISCUSSION OF SUBTOPIC 2
Topic Sentence: Located in the north-eastern part of Da-Jia Town, Tie Jen Mountain has different scenic spots.
Brief Outline of Content( You can use a list of important words.)
Not far away from the entrance, you may see the Forest Area on the left when you go up the stone stair case, step by step. You may also enjoyed the scent from different trees and flowers. Then, I would like to recomend the Statue Area in the Zhong Gong Park. There ,many big statues on different topics created by famous aritst are scattered in the park. Next, it would be the Jian-Jin Area. As we know, it's also a historical spot due to Zhen Gong Zhen's historical story.
PARAGRAPH 4: DISSCUSSION OF SUBTOPIC 3
Topic Sentence: The orignal butter crisp pastry used to be called " Common pastry."
Brief Outline of Content: (You can use a list of important words.)
Actuall, butter crisp pastry is the engagement pastry. According to the traditional wedding custom, the bride must give away "common pastry" to their relatives and firends to annouce their engagement. Since it started long ago, the pastry have been put in a simple plastic bag with a rubber band, yet it tastes delicious. Owing to making progress, the raw materials and bagged wedding pastry are not delicate, so it was called "common pastry." Gradually, it has become more delicate now and is the speciality that the visitors must buy.
PARAGRAPH 5: CONCLUSION
First Sentence:( Summarizes the three subtopics)In sum, my town is not only a twon with a Royal and Filial Monumented Archway for you to recall something old, but aslo has the beatuiful mountain with scenic spots, and lasty the delicous butter crisp pastry.
Last Sentence:( Concludes the entir essay) My town is absolutely a nice twon worth paying a visit to.
PARAGRAPH 1: INTRODUCTION( Be sure to include some background material, the main topic sentence for the whole essay, and a list of the subtopics in the order that you wil discuss them in the essay.
My hometown, Dajia, is located in the north west corner of Taichung County. Sitting on the coastline, it is a town famous for its Master Temple. Due to the annual pilgrimage to the temple, the small town is crowed with pilgrams and visitors every Lunar March. " Perhaps there are still other places and things that you would like to go to?' If you ask, I would defintely say yes, and right now I am going to introdue to you the Royal and Filial Monumental Archway, Tie Jen Mountain and the orignal famous butter crisp pastry in twon.
PARAGRAPH 2: DISCUSSION OF SUBTOPIC 1
Topic Sentence: One of the historical spots of DaJia Town is the Royal and Filial Monumental Archway.
Brief Outline of Content( You can use a list of important words.)
This mounmental archway is inscribed with Chun-Niang Li is the Buddua who is worshipped by the residents in Zhen Lan temple. This monumetal archway was build in Pao-Guang year 28 on the order of the emperor to praise Ma-Zu's great behavior. In this place, you can come and read the story and also find a tranguil moment after you're tired.
PARAGRAPH 3: DISCUSSION OF SUBTOPIC 2
Topic Sentence: Located in the north-eastern part of Da-Jia Town, Tie Jen Mountain has different scenic spots.
Brief Outline of Content( You can use a list of important words.)
Not far away from the entrance, you may see the Forest Area on the left when you go up the stone stair case, step by step. You may also enjoyed the scent from different trees and flowers. Then, I would like to recomend the Statue Area in the Zhong Gong Park. There ,many big statues on different topics created by famous aritst are scattered in the park. Next, it would be the Jian-Jin Area. As we know, it's also a historical spot due to Zhen Gong Zhen's historical story.
PARAGRAPH 4: DISSCUSSION OF SUBTOPIC 3
Topic Sentence: The orignal butter crisp pastry used to be called " Common pastry."
Brief Outline of Content: (You can use a list of important words.)
Actuall, butter crisp pastry is the engagement pastry. According to the traditional wedding custom, the bride must give away "common pastry" to their relatives and firends to annouce their engagement. Since it started long ago, the pastry have been put in a simple plastic bag with a rubber band, yet it tastes delicious. Owing to making progress, the raw materials and bagged wedding pastry are not delicate, so it was called "common pastry." Gradually, it has become more delicate now and is the speciality that the visitors must buy.
PARAGRAPH 5: CONCLUSION
First Sentence:( Summarizes the three subtopics)In sum, my town is not only a twon with a Royal and Filial Monumented Archway for you to recall something old, but aslo has the beatuiful mountain with scenic spots, and lasty the delicous butter crisp pastry.
Last Sentence:( Concludes the entir essay) My town is absolutely a nice twon worth paying a visit to.
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